Oh no, poor Xavier!!! I want to hug him, he looks so sad. I wonder what his owner did to him.
It isn`t as bad as he makes it sound to be. XD;; He`ll share his story next though.
I was really concerned with the amount of text on this and the next pages… I think it`s more than it should be. ^^;
Thats a kinda answer to some of my questions. And for some reason despite all his actions I like Xavier better than Grumps. Maybe because he tries to be helpful.
WOW! That last panel is beautiful!
Sometimes you don’t need much text on a page. Sometimes you do. This page works just fine for me, and would be OK with even more text (if you needed it). I love the comic, I love your art, and I think you’re doing a great job. I’d say “Don’t worry so much about it.” but maybe that’s why it’s so good.
Anyway, I can’t wait to hear Xavier’s story.
This is a meaty page! By meaty I mean full of story-stuff XD So text is good you know! Its interesting too and nice explanation. Can’t wait for story-time.
So, by not treating their muses right…
So… Selling out or something? XD
More like dismissing their creations, or something like that ?
@Jindra34
Xavier is much nicer I have to agree.
@Eugene
Thanks …oddly enough this last panel was what my scanner ruined the most and it needed more adjustments than I normally do. ^^;
@Stonefoot
I guess I over-worry ^^; It is probably because it is my first time and I want the story to flow the way I pictured it all but details like “is the text too much” or “is the text too little” are things I didn`t really plan too much. Thank you very much for the support though! I`ll keep giving my best and nothing less. =)
@Joel
Meaty indeed!
@Delta Pangaea
Could be a lot of things ^^’
@Darth Killer
Yup! ^^
Once again thank you for the comments!
*inserts self running through the waves in the background*
Nah, but really…it’s such a pretty page. ^^
Like…the important stuff is in the text, but the illustrations have enough detail and depth in them to match that of what’s being said. That, and the expressions are just about perfect.
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awww Xavier looks so sad in the last panel D:
Oh no, poor Xavier!!! I want to hug him, he looks so sad. I wonder what his owner did to him.
It isn`t as bad as he makes it sound to be. XD;; He`ll share his story next though.
I was really concerned with the amount of text on this and the next pages… I think it`s more than it should be. ^^;
Thats a kinda answer to some of my questions. And for some reason despite all his actions I like Xavier better than Grumps. Maybe because he tries to be helpful.
WOW! That last panel is beautiful!
Sometimes you don’t need much text on a page. Sometimes you do. This page works just fine for me, and would be OK with even more text (if you needed it). I love the comic, I love your art, and I think you’re doing a great job. I’d say “Don’t worry so much about it.” but maybe that’s why it’s so good.
Anyway, I can’t wait to hear Xavier’s story.
This is a meaty page! By meaty I mean full of story-stuff XD So text is good you know! Its interesting too and nice explanation. Can’t wait for story-time.
So, by not treating their muses right…
So… Selling out or something? XD
More like dismissing their creations, or something like that ?
@Jindra34
Xavier is much nicer I have to agree.
@Eugene
Thanks …oddly enough this last panel was what my scanner ruined the most and it needed more adjustments than I normally do. ^^;
@Stonefoot
I guess I over-worry ^^; It is probably because it is my first time and I want the story to flow the way I pictured it all but details like “is the text too much” or “is the text too little” are things I didn`t really plan too much. Thank you very much for the support though! I`ll keep giving my best and nothing less. =)
@Joel
Meaty indeed!
@Delta Pangaea
Could be a lot of things ^^’
@Darth Killer
Yup! ^^
Once again thank you for the comments!
*inserts self running through the waves in the background*
Nah, but really…it’s such a pretty page. ^^
Like…the important stuff is in the text, but the illustrations have enough detail and depth in them to match that of what’s being said. That, and the expressions are just about perfect.